Feedback on one of the poems Jiving in the Jungle which was put on a poetry forum.
It really shows your talent for alliteration, wordplay, humor, wit, and imagination. A very fun read, you also managed to bridge the gap in writing something which can be equally enjoyable to children - Gene
I absolutely LOVED it!!!! Easily a five star and nom! I loved it, I loved it, I loved it! IIt takes me a lot to get excited over poetry, but
this was so FUN! It bubbled bouncingly along and it made me quite
happy. I kind of want to memorize it.... I
am a band nerd and with your permission, I would love to send this
along to my band director who is recovering from an Aorta bypass
surgery at home (her kidneys didn't take to it and are not working, she
can't come back until they start up again). She would love it too.
Thank you for the wonderful write, I loved it! - Kitkat